The poem doesn't follow a rhyme scheme, there is punctuation, there is virtually no imagery, symbolism, etc, and figurative language is very minimal. In addition, I found the poem a bit awkward to read because of the unusual order in which certain words are placed. For example, "is is a helping verb. It helps because filled isn't a full verb. Can's what our owns in "our can of beets is filled with purple fuzz" just sounds a bit bizarre to say the least. You really need to read it out loud to grasp what it is really trying to say.
My my main objection to this poem is that I do not think it deserves the "poem status" simply because it lacks the ability to captivate the readers or to instill in them a sense of wonder; it is also deprived of any literary value which makes it very difficult to appreciate.
There is a rhyming scheme, and it is as follows:
ReplyDeleteABAABAABAABAABAABAA